Teacher Assessment Feedback - Preliminary Task

After we completed the preliminary task we needed feedback to see our strengths and where we need to improve. Overall it was a proficient, grade B/C L3,  piece of work, but to improve we need to do certain things that will make the shot look more realistic but also to get a higher grade. This feedback will benefit our thriller opening as we are now used to the shots that we can take and how easy or difficult it is to get them, for example, mid shots and close ups. Planning is important for the thriller opening, making sure we know exactly what shots to get to get the higher grades, especially shot reverse shots, which we did not add into the preliminary task, they are to add tension but also make it interesting for the audience when we come to edit our opening. All of the improvements that are suggested will be used for the thriller opening to make it look realistic and well-edited as possible to make the audience interested and want to carry on watching the thriller.